Rafferty!

My script from page one...

Rafferty
Created by Richard Caldwell and Andy Dawe-Collins

Page 1

Panel 1:
First panel is an afternoon skyline splash of suburbia generica, with each additional panel on this page an inset to the one before it, like pulling the reader down through a tunnel. Each frame can have a slightly off-kilter angle to it.

Caption: CDC and ANA present...

Panel 2:
A funny angled side view of a young teen boy's head, looking off camera. He is approximately all of a scrawny 13, light brown hair and blue eyes, with a melancholy look on his face, though lower half of mug is obstructed by bottom of the frame here.

Boy (via caption): "Call me Ishmael."

Panel 3:
A closer shot of the boy, with the growing reveal around his head that he is sitting on the roof of a house.

Boy (via caption): "Just kidding. My name is really-"

Panel 4:
An extreme closeup of Rafferty's left eye.

Caption: "---Rafferty."

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